Isabella, as a 3rd grader, has been doing more and more writing activities. Her last writing of the year is entitled "When I Grow Up." I found it amusing and thought I would pass it on. I hope everyone had a blessed Resurrection Day!
When I grown up I want to be a famer. I want pigs, sheep, chickens, turckeys, horses, cows, goats, ducks, and a sheepdog. I need a sheepdog to take care of my sheep. I want chickens for meat and for eggs. I want the cows and goats for milk. I want the horses for riding. I want the turckeys and ducks for meat. I want the pigs for meat. I want the sheep for meat and cloth. I will need my children [to help] with the animals. I will need my husband to raise mony.
I don't where or when she decided that she wanted to be a farmer. Apparently, her family will have a lot of meat! I especially love her purpose for her husband. I literally laughed out loud.
Hope everyone is well!
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Monday, April 05, 2010
Monday, April 27, 2009
Story Writers
After we went to the Disney on Ice, Isabella's school assignment was to write a story about it. The following is a truthful rendition--copied exactly the way she wrote it.
Once I went to disney on ice. I saw buzz, and the princesses, and Alice, and the Incredibles. The Incredibles went on vacation to disney land. In disney land they saw miky and miny mouse but then one day syndrome took miky and miny mouse to jail. The Indredibles found out that miky and miny mouse were gon. The Incretibles started to get to work when they found out they needed there soots. The Incretibles put on there soots and saved miky and miny mouse from jale. They saved disney land to. Now we can have a partty. The Incrtibles sved the day once agan. The End.
So we still need to work on some spelling and capitalization, but I think she did pretty well.
Once I went to disney on ice. I saw buzz, and the princesses, and Alice, and the Incredibles. The Incredibles went on vacation to disney land. In disney land they saw miky and miny mouse but then one day syndrome took miky and miny mouse to jail. The Indredibles found out that miky and miny mouse were gon. The Incretibles started to get to work when they found out they needed there soots. The Incretibles put on there soots and saved miky and miny mouse from jale. They saved disney land to. Now we can have a partty. The Incrtibles sved the day once agan. The End.
So we still need to work on some spelling and capitalization, but I think she did pretty well.
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